Monday, February 17, 2025

FIRST EDITING DRAFT

My own reflections:

- A discontinuity was found - cutting between two scene but the closet door isn't closed on the second one. I fixed it by putting the stream overlay on top to cover the discontinuity which saves time and budget on re-shooting.



First scene


Second scene (discontinuity)


Fix: Using the stream overlay to
cleverly hide the discontinuity


- Storyline is fully assembled but it is still missing some dialogue and voice acting.

    + Scene where the antagonist first appear is missing a line talking about the giveaway

    + Scene where the Streamer is attacked is missing a muffled scream

- Soundtrack wasn't added yet since I'm still working on it.


Feedback from other students and teacher:


What I've done well:


- There is an opening hook with an enigma

- Good use of props to encode genre conventions


What can be improved:

- Some scenes are a little bit shaky and can be stabilized.

- The story is not as thrilling without
special effects and sound-design.

- There are no transitions between scenes

- There is not yet a title or credit scene.

  

1st Draft:


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